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WhiteBlaster
02-21-2007, 10:25 PM
Eyes closed tight
In dim light
A being lay on a sheet
Made out of beet

Quietly as the soundless night
I do see a body rise to its height
Moving up in pace
Destinate to a place

Wherever it will exceed
It tricked what my eyes can see
Can it be true?
To know what is truce.

No! impossible
No one is possible
To lift in mid air
Like a hanging pear

Surprised I am
Running like a lamb
Made my confession
It's just an illusion.

AbZoNyX
05-10-2007, 05:15 PM
Well, this is pretty neat. Just something about it that doesn't flow though, otherwise good job.

preciouslost
07-30-2007, 01:49 PM
wow, what were you thinking when u were writing it?

Peanut
05-13-2008, 12:12 AM
haha...very funny

AbZoNyX
05-13-2008, 09:14 AM
Lol gravedigger.