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i actually write songs instead

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#1
lol...heres a song i wrote....but it's very dark....i guess

Have no faith within myself,
Every breath I take gets deeper to serve me well,
Growing impatient all along,
Look up at the sky to see what I’ve done wrong,

Scraping concrete with my nails,
Agonizing selfishly bleeding on my own,
Broken down so I adore,
Every spit I swallow bitterly in tar,

Nowhere to go,
Cuz I’m lost in self confusion,
Breaking my wall,
It’s too dark to hide alone,

The lights turn off when it’s time,
For every inch the devil comes feeding on my mind,
My closets the darkest enemy,
Shadows wake upon that set my chains free,

Running for days,
I found a place to call my own,
Gets dark tonight,
I don’t need no motivation,
Escaping from me another way to find what was left behind,
Having lost myself into a wrecked world it’s cold, it’s dark, dark and cold…

They gave me a chance to stand again,
Before I got to the top I saw we all pretend,
The truth’s as shallow as my own,
Raged in many differences since I lost my home,

But now I’ve got nowhere to go,
I’ve been lost in self confusion,
I’ve broken the wall,
I’m alone and it’s still too dark to hide again.
 
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ya usually i can write the words, but finding the melody i cant do that...i dont have any music background, but i have taken vocal classes.....
 
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#15
pretty good song/poem... it would be kind of difficult though to put the song into a melody though...
 
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